I had to describe the life of a girl in English can someone look over it?

Teen world

Sarah is 14 years old and from Freudenstadt. Her life is all about fashion, music and sport. She is really into Kylie Jenner and Justin Bieber. Her favorite song by Justin Bieber is "Love yourself". In her free time see likes to go shopping with her friends. Her favorite app are Snapchat and Facebook. Furthermore she plays piano. Every Thursday she has a piano lesson. She also likes to put on makeup. Her favorite series in Netflix is "Pretty little liars" and on the TV "The Bachelor". Her favorite country is England and her favorite food is pizza. In her free time she also so lots of sports. On Monday she has swimming and in Wednesday she has Football. On top of that she has every Sunday a football game. That is the life of Sarah, stressful only she loves her life.

It's okay but pretty choppy. Use tie words:

in addition (also)
additionally
furthermore
as well as (as well)
as well)
and (and)
both (also)

Sarah is 14 years old and from Freudenstadt. Her life is all about fashion, music and sport. She is really into Kylie Jenner and Justin Bieber. Her favorite song by Justin Bieber is "Love yourself". In her free time (comma) see (RS) likes to go shopping with her friends. Her favorite app (RS; grammar) are Snapchat and Facebook. Furthermore (comma) she plays (The specific article is missing here.) Piano. Every Thursday (comma) she has a piano lesson. She also likes to put on makeup. Her favorite series in (preposition) Netflix is "Pretty little liars" and on (---) Tv (RS) "The Bachelor". Her favorite country is England and her favorite food is pizza. In her free time (comma; repetition) she also so (RS; grammar) lots of sports. On Monday (comma) she has (word) swimming and in (preposition) Wednesday (comma) she has (word) Football (RS). On top of that (comma) she has every Sunday a football game (word; RS). - (Sentence order) That is the life of Sarah (better: s-Gentiv), stressful nur (German) she loves her life.

You should alternate verbs, use verbs other than just to have and to be. You don't write anything about fashion. The sentence structure is always the same.

The bold must be corrected. I hope I haven't missed anything.

For the vocabulary and spelling I recommend a good (online) dictionary, e.g. Pons.com,

for the grammar ego4u.de and englisch-hilfe.de - and stay away from the Google evil-doer and his trolling colleagues!

:-) AstridDerPu