In my english course we should send an e-mail to our teacher, who then checks her.
Now I wanted to ask if you can look over it for a moment and if necessary the e-mail improves 😁
Thank you in advance.
This is the e-mail:
Dear Mrs xxx,
I'm very happy to have a great time together.
I'm learning German since first grade and I really like this language. Most of the teachers I had a very good and good education, but mostly they did their lessons not very creative and interesting. I did it better and better, but sometimes I would have it better if it was more fun.
However, I've always had a good grade in English and that's why I think that's a good English speaker. I do not have any problems with the grammar or pronunciation. I think that's a lot, because of social media. For example on Instagram like Instagram, Snapchat and YouTube. To be honest, I only watch English YouTuber, because I prefer them to German YouTubers. Netflix shows or movies in English. In my opinion their content is just more entertaining and when I'm bored. So follow a Britain actor and watch his interviews. Last year in English class we read a book called "xxx". I did not like it at all, because it was kinda boring, but
I'll probably join English LK next year. As I said, I think my English skills are good. Of course I can still improve myself (and I really hope I'll do it) but I feel like I'm already good enough.
I do not have much hoped or wishes. I just want to have a great time and improve my English as much as I'm able to. 😁
Better than that of some with whom I study but there are still time errors, errors in conjugation and error ifs ums plural goes in your text. In addition, I think he sounds (not earned) extremely vorber. Sure, for school English it's good but there's still a lot of room upstairs.
Which mistakes in the plural?
Dear Mrs xxx,
I'm very happy to have a great time together.
I'm learning (grammar) English since first grade and I really like this language. Most of the teachers I had a very good and good education, but mostly they did their lessons not very creative and interesting (grammar). I did not want to learn more, but sometimes I wish that it would have been better (grammar) more fun.
However, I've always had a good grade in English and that's why I think that's a good English speaker. I do not have any problems with (---) grammar or (Something is missing) pronunciation. I think that I have improved my English skills a lot (not a comma) because of social media. Instagram, Snapchat and YouTube (This is not a complete sentence). To be honest, I only watch English YouTuber (grammar, not a comma) because I prefer them to German YouTuber (grammar). In my opinion their content is just more entertaining and when I'm bored I often watch Netflix shows or movies in English. I also follow a Britain (word) actor and watch his interviews. Last year in English class (Word Order, comma) we read a book called "xxx". I did not like it at all (no comma) because it was kinda (slang) boring, but I do not like reading (grammar) in general (grammar).
I'll probably join English LK next year. As I said, I think my English skills are good. Of course (comma) I can still improve (---) (and I really hope I'll do (---)) but I feel like (colloquial) I'm already good enough.
I do not have much (grammar) hoped (word) or wishes. I just want to have a great time and improve my English as much as I'm able to (Wndung). 😁
Yours sincerely (comma)
Which greeting and final formulas are used in English depends on the type of letter / email it is and
who the recipient is.
In English i.d.R. Following greeting and final formulas used,
- Dear Sir… Yours faithfully
- Dear Madam… Yours faithfully
- Dear Sir or Madam… Yours faithfully
- If you know the name of the recipient, it says:
- Dear Mr Hanson… Yours sincerely
- Dear Mrs. Hanson… Yours sincerely
- Dear Miss Hanson… Yours sincerely
- Dear Ms. Hanson… Yours sincerely
If you write to a good friend or colleague, you use:
- Dear Jack… Best wishes / Best regards
Directed to an entire department, it says:
- Dear Sirs… Yours faithfully
Private letters can be with you
- Dear (name) start
and with
- Yours, Love, Greetings, Regards, Bye, etc. Quit.
If you put a comma in English after the salutation, you write differently than in German with a capital letter.
the comma behind the greeting and closing formula in the English (business) letter is optional, i. It can be written, but not necessarily.
My personal impression is that the comma is left out here today rather than it used to be.
Anyway, if you put a comma in English after the salutation, you put a comma behind the final formula and vice versa, so no comma behind the salutation ----> no comma behind the final formula
Comma or not, unlike in German, English continues with a capital letter.
So:
Dear Sirs (,)
We would like to invite you to our…
So:
Dear Sirs,
We would like to invite you to our…
In British English you write Mr, Mrs etc. No point,
in American English, by contrast, with point,
So Mr., Mrs. Etc.
Tips and phrases for English letters can also be found here:
ego4u.de/de/cram-up/writing
The bold must be corrected. I hope I did not miss anything.
For the vocabulary and spelling I recommend a good (online) dictionary, e.g. Pons.com,
for the grammar ego4u.de and englisch-hilfen.de - and keep your fingers away from the Google Übelsetzer and his tr.tteligen colleagues!
Well, either you have to specifically say that it's just a YouTuber you like or it's YouTubers
Also, you do not like to read books and not book
Your email is perfect. If there's anyone around here in good question who "doctors" around on you just ignore him / her. You are NOT writing a grammar thesis for those who "doctor". I so impressed by your spelling of "pronunciation" which many spell "pronunciation".
