The text: Kiara Carrera is a teenage girl. She is oke of the main characters in the series "Outer Banks" which is published in 2020 on Netflix. It seems like she is the most sensitive in the clique. Kiara is often worried nevertheless she loves fun and parties.
Kiara Carrera is a teenage girl. She is oke (what do you mean by that?) Of the main characters in the series "Outer Banks" which was published in 2020 on Netflix. It seems like she is the most delicate in the clique. Kiara is often worried about her friends (maybe. Just say what she's worried about) but she also loves fun and parties.
Means delicate sensible because that's what I actually wanted to be in the text
No not really.
"One" is certainly meant here.
I improved it for you. 1. What do you mean by "oke" in the 2nd sentence? 2. The first mistake is "which was" instead of "which is", the second mistake is "delicate" instead of "sensitive" (fits better, in English one doesn't use sensitive) third mistake is that you have to say what Kiara is worried about ( worried) is. And instead of "nevertheless" use. Better "but she also loves…"
Would it be possible for you to improve it?
Yes, definitely.
After coffee - okay?
No problem
Except for the typing error ("oke") and the time error ("is published in…), there's actually not much to complain about.
I'll write it like I would have written it (staying as close as possible to your text):
Kiara Carrera is a teenage girl. She is one of the main characters in the series "Outer Banks", which was shown on Netflix in 2020. She seems to be the most sensible girl in the group. Kiara is often worried (/ worries a lot); nevertheless she loves fun and parties.
No it doesn't mean that.
https://www.dict.cc/englisch-deutsch/delicate.html
I have now written this in a new answer for the sake of clarity.
But I'm glad that the text isn't that bad at all
