Can someone correct my english?

Sa
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My day starts at 6 o'clock in the morning. After I get up, get dressed and go to the bathroom, I usually make myself a cup of tea and think about a small goal for the day. Then I always take the underground and S-Bahn to my training place. Sometimes I go jogging afterwards. Then I get ready to go to work. I always go there by underground. Sometimes I meet work colleagues on the way. During the break I always chat with the others. After work I go home and have lunch. I tell my parents about my day. After I have eaten lunch, I rest for a while and then do some sport. I often go to the skating rink to go mountain biking with my friends. I like to be out in the fresh air. When I'm back home, I often watch Netflix on my smart TV or tidy up my room. Then I always read something or listen to an audio book to fall asleep.

Ja

That sounds quite charming, Dear!

Je

After getting up I dress myself

Zo

Sounds great.

Beauty things:

Then I get ready to go to work

Would write "Then I get ready for work"

with the others

It is not quite clear who is meant. If it's your colleagues, "With them". Otherwise say who is meant.

But otherwise very good.

Ve

No. "I get dressed."

Ve

-work: The wording of the questioner is also okay.

Ve

Sounds good!

There are only a few stylistic details that, in my opinion, do not need to be discussed here.

Instead of "S-Bahn" I would write "tram".

Keep up the good work!

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