I watched the movie still on Netflix last year. It's a horror movie. The stars are… It's about a young woman called Maddie. She hoping to advance from her career as a teenager to her boyfriend in a living room. I really liked the movie because it was very exciting. What i did not like it was a little bit to short only 1 h and 20 min. It is suitable from 16 years.
How do you think it fits or are there still mistakes in it.
Grade level? Would be helpful.
9 class
So you have a few mistakes inside with the times as written below, but there are websites for that. How many words should you write?! Is a short while…
100
Since so small mistakes have crept in, so for example she hoping, there would have to be she hopes out, then I would put after author nen point and then I would leave the next she away, so after loosing her (my next amendment) ability to hear… And in the end I would write what I did not like what, that it was a little bit too short, in my opinion…
I'm also still improving my english, even if most of them work very well, of course, mistakes can have crept in… In which year are you (or which core year is English?)
I'm only a three-way candidate in English, but your text contains some bugs.
Thank you 9 class
